Monday, 31 July 2017


Here are one of the final passes at the pages. I have updated the blurry texture to a higher resolution one. I might still take another pass at the pages and do some colour corrections and line-work tidying up. 

The final two pages that had to be added were a pain frankly. I think that there is too much shown for only 2 pages resulting in me squeezing stuff in. It could have been an extra 4 pages had I had time and energy. There are a couple of panels I am not keen on and I am not sure the storytelling is clear enough in the sequence either.Ultimately, they sort of do the job but I'm not sure they are to the same standard as the previous pages and can tell I am not happy with them at all.

I will look at them with fresh eyes tomorrow and see if they can be improved but after that I will draw a line under it and move on. I still have the cover to sort, last fixes and some logo design work to complete for it.

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